Sonnet to a Blinking Moment (Rough Draft)

When I started this sonnet (poem) I had a few words that I wanted to use and a basic idea on how to use them. However when I started it my plan turned into bollocks and I came up with this(I like it so far), it is about...a girl that I see every now and then and this is a basically true telling of my meeting her. Let me know what you think, and what I should do to it to better it.


Sonnet to a Blinking Moment

As you neared I became intoxified,
And what I saw made me stupefied.
My senses seemed to be jailed,
As if you knew the power you held.
My fear made me mortified,
Truth is... I was terrified!
My mind was clearly blurry,
And my legs were wobbly like a sailor with scurvy.
When I blinked reality felt bent,
Now so near I was able to catch a scent.
Wondering for ways to get a lucky end,
What to her should I verbally send?
My courage grew with a glance from an eye,
So, the best thing to say I said, Hi.